How do you write and present research well? 5 –revise sentences over 30 words long

Abstract

Abstract Fewer words can be more powerful than many words. Identify boosting, metadiscourse, redundancy, hedging, feeble sentences, and convoluted expressions in the following sentence.[1] “It should be noted that while we have already mentioned the interaction of the implants with the tissue and will discuss later in this manuscript the effect of the regenerative therapies on the tissues, the possibility exists that the materials delivered to the interface may interact with the implant itself. We will briefly discuss this possibility now before moving forward with the rest of our discussion.”[2] What is the minimum number of words to express the same information? less than 10: “Materials at the interface can interact with the implant.” from 10 to 19 from 20 to 29 30 or more